Susie,
I couldn't help but think that your feelings are so much like mine in many ways...however it's from the birthmother's point of view.
What really caught my attention was the format and phrasing for your poem. I read it as if it were my own...it's beautiful.
Please feel free to read mine, it's at the link below.
Love and Peace,
Argentina
Thanks! But I Insist, Thank you!