If you ever feel comfortable with putting the sentence back in, you could then take a moment and explain what it means to you. When I first read it, I wanted to know more about what you learned about patriotism, what it meant to you to know that your DH was serving in the aftermath of 9/11. September 11 was a turning point in our nation's history; I'd be curious to know how it was a turning point for you. And I understand that you feel fine about explaining it all in person, but one thing I've taken away from all this DBML stuff is that you'll connect with the anectdotes and stories. Just MHO.
